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5/6/2016 3:26:31 PM

Anthony Guccia
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Hello All! I just did a little editing and fine-tuning on what I consider to be a few of my best pieces, "My Declaration of Independence to Addiction and the Persons I Affected," "The Illusion of "Free-Will," and "Man's Last Great Empire Fallen: on the Fields of Armageddon." Please take a small amount of time to read, and hopefully enjoy, these newly edited attempts at poetry by yours truly, Anthony Guccia! (That's me) I would enjoy hearing any/everyone's comments, advice, suggestions, critiques, criticisms (negative or positive), any feedback, at all really! Please and Thank You in advance! Anything you can do to help me improve in this literary venture, would be greatly appreciated!!

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