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5/16/2015 3:21:10 AM
Justin Worthy
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Deft hand became stifled
One man's life becomes a ripple
Gauntlet affixes a bridle
Proclaimed a idol
Fist clenching low
Archer's imbued bow
Body quivered like his arrows
Embodiment of a sparrow
Anthem for a obscured soul
Wind is a bitter blow
Gauntlet's icy hold
Prolonged the cold
Events transpired,
Such that brought down an empire
Whistling tone of his arrows
Embodiment of sparrows
edited by Nitsuj on 5/16/2015
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