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3/8/2015 5:01:28 PM
Edmund Linton
Posts: 14
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I watched --
dandelions waltz
with tips of yellow grain
blowing kisses
to the hum of a dragon fly,
rays of sun sprinkling their goodbyes
on darkening pond.
An amber glaze of misting dew
settled on this scene divine,
where past and present,
future rhyme,
to find a place outside of time.
As a cricket finely tuned his bow,
to a ribbon of cloud
blushing over the rising
crescent moon,
an evening stroke of the master’s brush
paused, as if to share
this magic dusk.
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