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3/2/2015 1:34:11 PM
Graphite Drug
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This is a good poem for its forced feel: "milkwhite right and wrong"? Wrong shouldn't be milkwhite. "Don't need so much progress"? The contraction doesn't work well with your language. The end of this poem may justify its strange grammatical twists. Interesting.
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