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1/7/2011 4:50:19 AM
Eiken Laan Posts: 10
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An apprehensive Amy Births baby Bob Carefully cradles cries Dons dry diapers Emanates endless emotions Fraught frantic fears Grateful glad greetings Huge happy hugs Innate intuition increases Joyful jaded journey Key kind kin Learner loving lavished Must make money Nurturing new needs Oceans of options Play pray plan Quiet questioning queries Restful rescue remedies Seeking soother solutions Truly tired times Uncertain, unforgettable unity Varied viral visits Warm winter woollens Xylophones xeroderma, x-ray Yesterday youthful years Zestful zoned zoo
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2/20/2011 1:22:23 PM
Mackenzie Bush Posts: 2
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Very nice, Have never seen this type of poem before. I like it. Congrats on your baby I presume.
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