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4/17/2014 1:05:23 AM

cheung shun sang
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Worldand business and peace...
Actionsbring some change in mind or in deeds.

Actionsreacted are also changed.

Whatare causes are events of fates.

Someeffects can do and fixed.

Axiomsof truths derive to theorem of life.

Allhuman need morals and laws abiding.

Peoplesshould take their turns to govern or
masterysome ways as they could be.

Arethere are also common polls.

Limityour styles of business but no a real one to limit your wealth besideyou are not.

Stylesof business are bad if they are monopoly.

Eachstates or countries citizens have
rightto lives and not fighting.

Butit only can be if only if all countries obey the laws of peace.

Sothe name republican would be so right.

Onlyminds consistency is then united our worlds.

Forcesthat are right and fair is good to count our peace.

ButChina bossy bosses are other.

Ormore critical world army forces should
getequilibrium.

Ambitionsand aggressions must be hold down.

Monopolybusiness are inner damned.

Greedychina tyrants upset the whole worlds.

Equilibriumcan involve army forces, sciences knowledge, matters resources and
countrywealth..

Howeverbeside reasonable and righteous
forcesthe world have aggressive forces that
lineup with cabal as mainly Chna and Russia.

Thenthe danger of wars may break down.

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