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3/27/2014 12:47:18 AM

cheung shun sang
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Advancement..

Farther of medicinemention asGREEK HIPPOCRSTES.

However earth and sky.have no gods.

We collect and usemedicines by try and error..

When there new spices ofdrugs and chemist we mix them into
outtake bloods or cells tofind the desire phenomenons or not.

Also before we use them tohuman we test ite properties and strength
just by giving them toother animals.

Caues of disease canaccess us so bad.

Just diassembled are waysof china tyranny.

Herbs for then should mustbe assembly.

Deals with anatomy andmedical ethics should have
best for regard.

Who may success as pacifyif they cure the bad guys or
the dirt.

Hippocratic oaths mustfulfill for bring some luck to patient.

Pledge beneficial treatsfor health are rather rich or not.

Thou obligations are waysof doctors that are moral needed.

Biologic fields can dealwith bodily structures also psyche minds.

There are body functionsalso mental functions are those for regards.

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