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8/14/2013 10:17:23 AM

Teresa Lindsay
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As I go thru life, I wander alone, lost in it allOthers that depend on me, I give what they needNever asking or getting in return, as if I don't matterI keep all my fears, tears and pain inside, HiddenLove comes and goes, True love not foundI continue on, Strong for others, weak for meI grew up to do without question, to carry onTo be strong and hold my head high, no matter Been beaten and broken, never completely I will carry on, weak as I may be, Strong in spirit I will not give up, I will survive, I am a survivor Nothing or no one can take that away from me. Bring on adversity, problems and hate, bring it on Let me show how I survive with out you in my life See I carry on, I mend and heal, I survive
edited by Tlynn68 on 8/14/2013

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