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8/6/2013 3:51:02 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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They all gathered 'round some tittered others smiled
The chesty one with the long legs glared,
Nothing can be more inconsiderate than to be told "no"
Your dream is dead
8/1/'13
edited by Gabe on 8/6/2013
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