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7/26/2013 4:55:01 AM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

Life provides all the drama I need
From Britain's Queen
To the College Dean

If you think I serve you purpose
Get to know the insides,
Don't judge by my surface

I'm not here to fill your time
I'm here to make the most of mine
So if you want to be here that's cool
If not, fix yourself,
I brought a bag of tools

I'm not here to fix you or diss you
Not about fixing flaws or telling you what to do
I'm here to enjoy the moment
Not sure how many are ahead
I'm gonna enjoy them all before I'm dead

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