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6/22/2013 7:50:37 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 94
I kissed her sweetly for the branch that connected us,
But she already said "she was ready"--
We never spoke of it...
Mom cried,
Then she was gone, too

edited by Gabe on 6/24/2013
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