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6/11/2013 11:06:21 AM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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Lady,
In me you did inspire
This poem like wildfire--
For your beauty is so deep
You make me feel small and meek--
From me my heart you did rend
Because from heaven you did descend
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