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5/28/2013 6:59:29 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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Love and Happiness can exist together--
As waves that go up and down,
Yet separate from one another--
But when they meet it's bliss
Like Love's first kiss
Short and Powerful
5/28/'13
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