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5/24/2013 12:50:31 AM
Nato Calubiran Posts: 23
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Cigars left aside Muddied floors The rain isn't stopping The thunder roars
A creaking door The windows are open Shadows rise Then glasses were broken
Hello there Would you come out and play As the children stare Ready to slay You run and run The fun has just begun The moment you'll hold still You'd feel a chill The moment you turn back The moment you'll die Tripping, a branch of a tree Children's faces with glee You shout and cry Asking the reason why
As you wake up from this bad dream You'd realize you're in bed You'd just hurt your head Drink a pill Think slowly Think still Someone might enter Yes a child will Asking you Would you come out and play?
Comments! Yes Comments! YEYEY! edited by Yamawaro on 5/24/2013
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