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5/18/2013 9:00:48 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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You and me, we are energy;
The leftover remnants of stars
That helped create us and planets as Mars.
And when we die, no need to cry
For I think then we become ourselves again.
But if you want to fear some great ill
Be here for the "Great Crunch or Chill"
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