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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
5/8/2013 9:16:18 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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Beauty is a flame--
Short if shallow, long if true--
Painful when not understood--
Yet a delight if you could--
It burns my heart
12/12/'10
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