Poetry Forum
For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
5/7/2013 6:25:40 PM
Teresa Lindsay Posts: 16
|
The world outside is unkind, giving us many lows We become weary trudging thru the day Feeling downtrodden and weary from it Come on home my dear and tell me about the day Lay your weary head on my shoulder, cast out your worries Tell me your troubles and let it all go from your mind If I could I would make the world go away for you to sleep Lay your weary head down and close your eyes I am here holding you close to my heart so you can sleep Rubbing your back to ease the tension away Softly kissing your check as you drift off Don't fight the sleep lay your weary head down Sweet dreams my love
|
• permalink
• reply with quote
|
Powered by AspNetForum
6.6.0.0
© 2006-2010 Jitbit Software