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3/17/2013 3:43:16 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Can watch Can't touch It's a bubble of trouble Turns my into Oscar the grouch
Unstoppable drama Could lead to brain trauma Can't let that be I'll just keep my ora clean
Do my best Keep my head afloat No control Let the trouble flow
Listen to the occasional bicker Feel my radar flicker When it's getting to hot I make sure to step back a notch
Keep my space Been to long This situation Should come with a warning Or a date or expiration
I know you know It's been said You know how I feel This is no natural disaster A controlled situation Blown up ten times faster
I refuse to support A abusive mission, You should abort
I stay miles apart I'm a phone call away Hoping you'll top off Give yourself relief Oh, one day
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