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1/13/2013 1:01:46 PM
Ursula Black
Posts: 3
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falling
tumbling
landing
hurting
getting up
limping
breathing
crying
hiding the pain
smiling
clean up the blood
smile
put on makeup
smile
wipe off a tear
smile
"i'm okay"
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