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1/12/2013 2:56:13 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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You shattered my world I was a sweet innocent girl Thought my future was solid gold Then you flushed my heart bitter cold Went from a flow chart to a volcaniceruption Minutes, days, weeks, it'll eventuallyeven out. One mans laziness caused another manscorruption
When foundation crumbles You constantly stumble Balancing on floating ice Pray for a solid double on those dice Teased a lot by a half roll, There's just so much I can't control
There's nothing more powerful than notbeing scared Skepticism I've grown close to, afriendship hard to bear Think of a million possibilities witheach choice There's always going to be thatinternal voice Why make it so hard? One mans laziness is another manscorruption That someone else will take care of me, I'll never jump to that assumption
Gets harder and harder, Then easier and easier Harder and harder Then easier and easier
All that matters is how I spend my timenow What I do now will help my futuresomehow Where will I be in five years? Have no idea Asked me that a lot when I was younger, Always had an answer But back then I was just a kid
Love, what's love your asked? You lectured so many times I'll put it on repeat along side alaugh track Love is opposite you It's opposite everything you do Trying to deal with real love That's truly far and above Anything you can comprehend.
You taught me the greatest in life Concentrate on the good, Keep your head up with pride Conquer the madness by ignoring it Do positive things to destroy it
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