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1/1/2013 1:57:56 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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It's a New Year Comes a New Fear May not meet expectations High hopes with no expectedreservations Make things work right Try to sidestep every bite Open new doors Keep climbing them floors Wave to those new Try new recipes, Start a new crew No need for resolutions Make your own constitution Be the best you can be Maybe everyone wont see The ones that do Will stop acting a fool They'll get the gist Put up an iron fist Be at your back When the world tries to attack This is the beginning Keeps the world spinning Look out for you brothers and sisters We'll finally hear them rich bad boyscry whimpers Grin gradually turns teeth and smile Feels good Stand away They knew a mile long sword would stackthem one day
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