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10/21/2012 8:45:48 PM Schuyler Johnson Posts: 17	Walk the line, straddle the fire; tested through time by desire. Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause; stop and ponder, time to pause. Topped a hill, I've reached a peak; wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek. But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride; joy of contentment is now where I abide. -- ...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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10/28/2012 4:18:40 PM Darrel Smith Posts: 2	jspj1971 wrote: Walk the line, straddle the fire; tested through time by desire. Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause; stop and ponder, time to pause. Topped a hill, I've reached a peak; wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek. But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride; joy of contentment is now where I abide.
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