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10/12/2012 9:40:09 AM
Schuyler Johnson
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Nip in the air, leaves beneath my feet;
crunch, crunch, crunch, cycle of seasons repeat.
Seems like just last year we were here;
change aint so bad, nothing to fear.
The beat goes on, time travels forth;
birds descend down from the north.
Soon will be the day, carols we'll sing;
to grandmas house, gifts we'll bring.
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...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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