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9/19/2012 6:44:31 AM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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On your racks I see the same dress overand over,
Might as well buy the one I saw at WiseBuys
I want a halter top with SwarvoskiCrystals,
You tell me it'll be impossible tofind,
Sweetheart neckline with form fittingsatin to thighs,
I want a hi low hemline,
Also impossible?
My patience is on a thin line....
My lucky day,
Thank you De La Rosas,
I show you my drawing of a dress,
You quickly were able to fulfill myrequest,
After months of searching and tryingon,
My dream has been satisfied, nowthere's nothing wrong
edited by svlynn18 on 9/19/2012
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