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9/5/2012 5:29:02 PM Lynn Dolly Posts: 133	Three questions should be illegal toask, First, Have you found love? Second, Have you found Marriage, Third, Do you have a baby in the babycarriage They all say “we just want you to behappy baby doll” This is why so many drink alcohol. Useful responses to make questioningend, First, I found my best friend, Second, Have you been divorced before? Third, Was it the pills you skipped?, Or the amount of Martinis or MalibuRums made your little Theodore I try to make good decisions, don't bemad, I don't frown on your bad decisions, Cant help you dressed scantly clad, I'm not god, I try not to judge, Depending on the source, It can be like eating fudge, Others drama from bad choices, I can hear heavenly voices, “This is why you wait! Your life, your decisions, there's no room for debate”. edited by svlynn18 on 9/5/2012
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9/16/2012 4:32:44 AM Amy Green Posts: 8	You are so incredibly cliche it is unbelievable
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9/19/2012 5:17:11 AM Lynn Dolly Posts: 133	morabgirl wrote: You are so incredibly cliche it is unbelievable Thank you! Thats so sweet))
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