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8/27/2012 1:49:17 AM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
Out with some friends,
They're talking about men,
I'm thinking about business,
Music and what I'll write with thispen,


Someone mentions the Kardashians,
I just think “The Karsmashians?,
They love reality T.V.,
I' d rather see Me, Myself, and Irene,


They talk about bars and clubs,
All the drunken nights and men invites,
Id rather be at home with my man,
My loves already in high demand,
Watching movies kickin back,
Guess I don't belong with the cat pack
edited by svlynn18 on 8/27/2012
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