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7/10/2012 10:12:49 PM
Joe Geraci Posts: 1
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Thank you for reading my poem - Wild Beasts at Play
where shadows devour twilight there are wild beasts at play they dwell in their aphotic world and we are two of the same
Your eyes, their amber burn with embers heavy like the stars bear weight to rest upon my feeble heart
what a burden
and what a burden to have a taste for it to be ripped away like the light of day
while by natures chords the sky is spun like a cosmic gyre your allure emanates pain like a wild fire and we are two of the same
your cries howl the night your hide as black as it's affliction our dark sunken minds we are wild beasts at play edited by JG90 on 7/10/2012 edited by JG90 on 7/10/2012
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