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Never would I have thought I would start writing at 73 years of age. I have thoroughly enjoyed my voyage into the written spirituality of poetry and am thankful for the opportunity. In my seven years here I have met many new and wonderful persons. Having them accept me as a friend has been a moving experience.

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Kudos For Catie

Blog Posted:11/7/2012 3:29:00 PM

The following haiku was written by Catie. Look at it carefully and learn what a real haiku looks like, feels like and tastes like. A work like this can not be by accident.

where no light plays
nor reflects upon my waters --
my heart is eclipsed

First of all she has immersed herself into the poem, so it is very subjective and modern sounding. It is also very abstract in the way it is presented and deals in concepts. It tells of her emotion when she is left out of the loop, so to speak, with no one wanting her opinions or good advice. It makes her feel unfulfilled as a person, and as a "want to be" friend.

"where no light plays" is a tremendous metaphor for - - - ignorance of circumstance, lack of sophistication, one way conversation, a place where there are no answers, aloneness, feeling of lonliness, little or no education, and depending on where your idividual interests lie, there are probably a couple more that each of you could name.

"nor reflects upon my waters" is a simple reaffirmation of the foregone conclusions above, with the added stipulation that : even if some of those things have been presented to her, for one reason or another, she has come up short.

"my heart is eclipsed"- - - - I am devastated, my goodness has been cut short, not accepted, belittled, muddied, tainted, I no longer feel a whole person as when circumstance was different.

Let your mind wander: take wings and stimulate your immagination. What else could this tremendous poem be saying. After all there are THREE WHOLE LINES OF INFORMATION, the longest being every bit of
7 syllables. And she makes it look so easy. How does this poem speak of you personally?

I salute you madam poet.

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Charles
Henderson

Date: 11/8/2012 2:01:00 PM

Su, not to dispute anything you have added as it is all worthy content. The original rendition has "upon my waters" making it subjective by injecting her presence into the piece.

Andrea
Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2012 7:53:00 AM

Beautiful!

Joann
Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:56:00 PM

I wouls also like to add my plea for a regular column.

Joann
Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:51:00 PM

I could interpret this also a little more literally: when the moon is in eclipse, there is no light, and there is no reflection,hence her heart is the moon (which is often the seat of love as is the heart) This could mean she is broken hearted, waiting for the eclipse to end, and find new light, new love.

Cyndi
Macmillan

Date: 11/7/2012 4:39:00 PM

CHARLES!!! Awesome, awesome blog! Catie's haiku is touching and profound. I only have a minute. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THIS TYPE OF BLOG FROM YOU, WEEKLY! My idea: you could even contact poets (as you did with Catie) and ask if you could pick them as the haiku of the day!!! Then REPOST the haiku as SOUP HAIKU FOR THE DAY. You could highlight why the haiku works, the haiku elements it captures. I'm serious, here. This is excellent in every way possible. A 'positive' approach is a powerful teaching tool. Yup. I'm likin' the honey! MORE MORE. Hugs, grins, winks and 6 stars, Cyndi

Tracy Edwards
Date: 11/7/2012 5:30:00 PM

Good idea Cyndi.. xxx

Tracy
Edwards

Date: 11/7/2012 4:38:00 PM

Yay Go Catie.. Go Catie.. xxx This is exactly why I keep my Ku to myself :D

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/7/2012 4:26:00 PM

hey Catie, I'll bow to Chas's superior knowledge on this one, I did tell you what I thought already but I write traditional [like] haiku not more modern ones where some subjectivity is allowed, my only question would be do you think you can consistantly write a traditional one now?

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