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Andrea Dietrich grew up in Iowa and now resides in Utah with a spouse and two cats. She has two grown children and six grandchildren. Having graduated BYU with a Spanish major/ESL minor, she has spent most of her adult life teaching. It wasn't until 2000 that she began writing in earnest and discovering her "niche" as a writer of lyrical poetry. The internet opened up a new world for her, and she has spent two decades now participating in poetry clubs, acting as a judge of poetry contests for various magazines, for the website Shadow Poetry, and for Poetry Soup. 

Ms. Dietrich has won numerous awards, as well as the title Poet of the Year 2008, from the Yahoo group, Poetry For Thought. In addition, she has won prizes from the magazines Lucidity, Bell's Letters, Art with Words, Poets at Work and SP Quill, the magazine for which she wrote grammar and poetry articles as well as movie reviews and for which she acted as poetry editor for the head editor Marie Summers for six years. Many of her poems appeared in Shadows Ink, a yearly published series of chapbooks of award winning poetry as well as in numerous other anthologies. Her short stories appeared in many issues of SP Quill and much of her poetry was published in eight chapbooks (no longer sold online). 

Since coming to Poetry Soup, Ms. Dietrich has been both contest sponsor and winner of numerous contests. In 2010, her poem "Cinder Girl" was first place winner of Soup's International contest (these contests are no longer held).  A song was created from her lyrics "Honeymoon Serenade" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDWxc4cpHDc) and two movies have been made featuring the poetry of Andrea Dietrich: "A Tale of Fire and Ice" (a 4 min. Z-Film Fest Project, 2014) and the full length movie "Six Days of Sistine" in which 20 poems of Ms. Dietrichs serve as the thoughts of two characters played by Jamie Campbell Bower and Elarica Johnson (directed by Richard J. Perry, 2019) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt7710360/


Trying to Judge; please edit!/ A Note on Modern Haiku/Tanka of US

Blog Posted:5/26/2016 7:22:00 PM

I have read all the entries in my contest now. At first I was seeing all kinds of mistakes from bad spelling and incorrect syllable count to  the use of capitalization in tanka and haiku when I asked  for there not to be. One common mistake: its vs it's (which means "it is" for those who don't know).I almost wish I had just asked people to do quatrains. I got a few really cute quatrains.  (BTW, quatrain rhyming lines ought to have fairly equal syllable count).  One person had their name on their poem, so it was disqualified. I may possibly be judging tonight but if you see no winner list up soon, it means you still have till morning to edit! Then I need to think up a new contest idea!!!

A note about capitalized words in tanka and haiku. I have discovered from a friend here that in Engand it is acceptable to capitalize the first words of lines in tanka and haiku. You can't do that in a reputable American journal in the USA, so I am only trying to teach people the correct format in case they try to publish in my country, for example, with the Tanka Society of America. That is why I have been trying to be strict on that, and also strict with people using traditional syllable count when I've asked for modern way (though I will not disqualify a really nice one for being traditional syllable count). 



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Date: 5/27/2016 10:53:00 AM
My tanka poem got published in the first issue of Tanka Journal ... the particular journal wasn't strict on capitalization, but they DID want traditional syllable count (with some exceptions if the poem was really good) ... I wrote mine capitalizing the first letter of each line, and I wish I hadn't, just because I think it looks better without. Sijo is a bit longer so I think that's okay to have capitals ... I consider Sijo to almost be a narrative form of haiku.
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Date: 5/27/2016 4:31:00 PM
how long ago was that, timothy. And was it Tanka Society? I have grown accustomed to the new way and I now prefer it. I agree, Sijo to me seems great with normal capitalization and punctuation. I attribute that to the fact that a sijo is not really using phrases like haiku. Tanka is supposed to be more like haiku , to my understanding
Date: 5/27/2016 2:53:00 AM
I always thought capitals and punctuation in Tanka, Haiku and other such poetry were jarring and took away from the essense of the poem, and were to be avoided unless they added to the idea. I was quite surprised at one of the Contest hosts who made a note that Capitals and Punctuation were preferred. Thank you for the clarification on the subject. PS is international so it difficult to assess what is required sometimes. This happens with US/UK spellings and idion, too. And the Time Zones - sometimes one can miss deadlines because of them! ~karam~
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:50:00 AM
I agree very much about the no capitalization in haiku. It looks a bit strange, considering that the form is just supposed to capture little thoughts and moments ... not lengthy sentences. Plus, since haiku was originally written in Japanese, it makes more sense, since Japanese has no capitals.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/27/2016 8:20:00 AM
I used to capitalize and use punctuation , etc, in tanka. when I was rejected in US publications for doing it, I started reading a lot more of them and realized I preferred the modern standards set by the Tanka society. The shorter lines just feel more haiku to me also. Also they finally let me into one of their magazines when I conformed to their style. On the other hand, I do not mind metaphors in haiku and tanka, and that goes against the grain with some of the haiku/tanka magazines that are out there today.
Date: 5/27/2016 2:53:00 AM
I always thought capitals and punctuation in Tanka, Haiku and other such poetry were jarring and took away from the essense of the poem, and were to be avoided unless they added to the idea. I was quite surprised at one of the Contest hosts who made a note that Capitals and Punctuation were preferred. Thank you for the clarification on the subject. PS is international so it difficult to assess what is required sometimes. This happens with US/UK spellings and idion, too. And the Time Zones - sometimes one can miss deadlines because of them! ~karam~
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Date: 5/26/2016 9:10:00 PM
Andrea, I think mine is okay, pray it is okay, excited to see the list of winners... Constance
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:21:00 AM
I'm going right now to try to finish it!! Wish me luck!!

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