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Blog Posted:2/18/2014 9:42:00 AM
I have met many people here on the soup, lifetime friends all with a common desire, poetry. Poets like Linda-Marie Bariana, Catie Lindsay, A Poet Destroyer, Charmaine Chircop, Nette Onclaud and that is to name a few. I say this because we found each other through poetry. Commenting on the work of others WILL get your poetry read. When I was a newbie I would find it annoying that I would post my work, have thirty or so views and no comments. That hurts!! I realized that in order to make friends and gain exposure I had to read as well as write! Comment instead of just review. If you read it and don't leave your stamp how am I to branch out from my circle of friends and know who to visit. Like any good writer I thrive on the opinions of my fellow soupers, I look forward to what you have to say, GOOD OR BAD!! All I ask is that if you read my work please stop in and say something, tell me what you like or despise about it. I mean keep it rated like a Disney movie, I want to know. 
I am sure I am not the only one who feels this way!!
I look forward to making new friends because many new faces have emerged in my 18 month absence. I have a lot of work to do, see you soon!!!Asavvy1

This is not a vent session, nor am I blasting any one poet/poetess!! I just really needed to get that out.




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Date: 2/19/2014 6:59:00 AM
hi there, jarred...glad you are active again... i try my best to return the favor by commenting on poets' works... good you brought this to my attention...great way to go!.. huggs!
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/19/2014 9:52:00 AM
Had a lot to say and I figured this may spark some kind of change!!Thank you!!Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 3:37:00 PM
Jared, I have little time right now so I came to comment on your blog because it is one I am really glad to see. What you are saying is SO useful to people who feel sad or left out. I wish they would heed your advice. You just have to work really hard to leave notes for others and then they will often do the same back!! Glad to see you here again!!
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Date: 2/19/2014 2:27:00 AM
As the veterans we should help guide and mold the up and comers. I am on my LMB production hype!!Thank you Andrea!! Good to see you too!!
Date: 2/18/2014 1:32:00 PM
Jared I have been on here around 5 months and try to comment as much as possible. Will stop by your poems and leave some friendly feedback. Have a great day. Robin AKA "Sweet Pea"
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Date: 2/18/2014 2:28:00 PM
I look forward to it.. I will do the same!!Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 11:50:00 AM
I enjoy getting comments as I'm new here. You are right in saying we need to comment on other poets' works, in return they acknowledge us. Thank you for reminding me, Jarred. I come and go but will try to keep my presence more visible.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:54:00 AM
As I will stop by and visit. Thank you for taking the time.Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 11:43:00 AM
I love it here!! F.J., poetry helped me to find inner peace when I was angry(all the time), poets here embraced me. Carol, is one of the original six that reached out.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:42:00 AM
Deitrich, Linda-Marie, Kendrick, Chircop & Rueben as well. They helped me develop & friendships grew. Like I said, I love it here. I will make it a point to stop in and see you soon. probably after work tonight.Asavvy1
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Date: 2/18/2014 10:51:00 AM
Hey there Jared, I also have been away for so long. I am trying to get things going so that I may be here with all our old friends and to make some new ones also. Please if the door is closing please grab it and hold it open for me as I am getting slower and slower these days. :) Carol
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/20/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Jared, you are a true gentleman. :)
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/18/2014 11:07:00 AM
Not only will I hold the door open, I will carry you in if you need me too!! I am so glad to see you back. I agree, reconnect and build our conglomerate with fresh new talent.Love always, Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 10:06:00 AM
Okie dokie smokie, roger, will go, over & out ;)
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Date: 2/18/2014 10:12:00 AM
Hey Debbie!! It is good to see you!! I need to stop by and catch up on all that I have missed..:-)Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
I feel the exact same way. I've said before that I wish people would just say they loved it, hated it, didn't understand it, etc. and why; I think that kind of feedback is important and allows one to grow as an artist. I wish I had more time to leave comments and review more work, but it seems like I am always busy with different projects and just life in general. Great blog! Nice to meet you; I'm Chan aka "Archaic" :)
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/18/2014 10:11:00 AM
We have nothing but time to get acquainted.. See you soon Archaic!!Asavvy1
Date: 2/18/2014 9:49:00 AM
Jared, I am the poet destroyers daughter. Royal, 21 fixin to be 22. Yahoo! It is nice to meet you. The only poets I know are the one's on my favorite list plus a few poets who held my hand during my time of need. This is a great place. I don't post as much, my life's all about work and my daughter Ezzelle. I will take a look, and say hi. Royal
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/18/2014 9:59:00 AM
As will I Royal!! Thank you for stopping by. On my way to you now!!Asavvy1

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