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Introverted, quiet, compassionate, giver

Sister of four biological brothers ,two adoptive brothers

Lover of God, Family, Country

Who feels love, compassion, dedication

Who fears downward spiral of our nation

Moral decline of the people

Would love to see a national revival

Resident of Georgia, USA

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Brown Thrasher

Blog Posted:11/10/2012 7:10:00 AM

I have written a Haiku called Brown Thrasher...

Challenge__ give training criticism to the work so that others can learn..

Make it a very simple critique so that those that want to learn more about writing Haiku can gain from the experience..

I am not going to take offense on this for I am opening the door on this one..

Remember do it in a tone of love and teaching...

I go on Monday for my stress test to see if they see anything going on with my heart that could be causing me to feel like I am going to faint and feeling dizzy...Yesterday was fairly non-push the button on my heart monitor and the day before..I had about three days in a row before then that I was pushing the button all the time..

I am going to Macon today to try to find the place where I have to go on Monday for we have no idea where it is located and we have to be there at 8:30 A.M.

Sara

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Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/13/2012 6:47:00 PM

Ohhh geez they could have at least got ride of a few wrinkles for all that scare and NOISE! HUGS

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2012 4:29:00 PM

I survived being nuked today..I am not any more wrinkled than I was when I went in to the center but not better off either..Sara

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2012 1:00:00 PM

Thanks Deb, Maybe someone will see the suggestions and get a better idea how a Haiku should be written..Sara

Poet Destroyer
A

Date: 11/11/2012 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Sara, the pictures help lots... now I can visual the haiku with the bird above,,, xox~pd

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2012 1:06:00 PM

PD, Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/11/2012 9:07:00 AM

[fall morn Brown Thrasher/ visits empty bird feeder.../under millet grows] [a Brown Thrasher lits/on an empty bird feeder -- millet grows below]or [a Brown Thrasher lits/on an empty bird feeder -- grasses grow below]

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2012 1:05:00 PM

Thanks for the suggestions..Sara

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/11/2012 9:02:00 AM

Maybe you will come home super bionic! Like a super woman [trying to make you smile] I have a difficult week too.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2012 1:01:00 PM

I will have to look at it in that light that I will come away as a super bionic like WonderWoman...Ha!!..Sara

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2012 5:00:00 AM

Oh, it is nuclear medicine that I am going to on Monday..I guess they are going to Nuc me..Will I come out looking like a dried up raisin?...Sara

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2012 4:59:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for stopping by..I know that this is a difficult time for you and your family..Sara

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2012 4:50:00 AM

Thanks, Deb...Yes grain millet is a seed that comes in bird seed apparently..Some of the birds will rake out what they don't like and it will come up under the bird feeder..Companies will also put hemp seed in bird seed..I learned this by doing some reading after seeing this millet growing..Sara

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/11/2012 9:00:00 AM

I THINK what was the AH HA! for you [now you tell me if I'm wrong I'm trying to guess from what you said above] the it was inspiring, awesome that the dregs GREW into green grass [like something from what the birds concidered nothing?]

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2012 7:57:00 PM

Sorry Sara..should ahve started out by saying I PRAY all will be well, this aging..well, it's not for the faint of heart!

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2012 7:52:00 PM

[fall morn Brown Thrasher/ visits empty bird feeder.../under millet grows] you are leaving out the articles like a, an, the in an attempt to come withing the 5/7/5 guidelines ..in haiku circles they call this Tontoism [ a referrance to the stilted way the white writers had Tonto talking to the Lone Ranger]

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/10/2012 7:56:00 PM

your first to lines are conceptually and gramatically connected that good! [under millet grows] is vague brings no image or sensory input? why did the fact the bird feeder had millet growing under it? give you a surprise? it seems unreal? was there grass growing from the fallen seed?

Jack
Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 3:57:00 PM

Will be thinking of you on Monday, my friend. I love your haiku : )

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2012 3:15:00 PM

Joann and Seren, Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2012 2:46:00 PM

Andrea, Thanks for stopping by..Looking forward to your comments about my 'Ku ...Sara

Seren
Roberts

Date: 11/10/2012 1:41:00 PM

Good Luck with your test Sara, if its any consolation to you I had openheart surgery mid june. Have come along a treat, in fact I have started working again doing shorter hours til xmas. So dont worry about anything, whatever they find they can put right. .. Seren

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2012 2:58:00 PM

Seren, What type of problem did you have? I am glad that you did okay and are getting back to your regular life...Sara

Joann
Grisetti

Date: 11/10/2012 9:31:00 AM

Lovely photos. I do hope all goes well with you. Please accept my huigs and prayers.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2012 2:54:00 PM

Joann, Thanks for the well wishes..I hope that all goes well also...I is called nuclear medicine.I guess they are going to nuc me..Wonder if I will out all dry as dried out leather and wrinkly..Sara

Andrea
Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2012 8:50:00 AM

Sara, just whizzing past here on my way out the door, and I had to say to you: you are someone whose haiku have improved in this past year. I have read some really amazing ones from you. I don't think I've seen brown thrasher yet. When I return here, I'll let you know. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2012 2:52:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by...Sara

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