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Viv's missing lttr contst- finalizd

Blog Posted:10/12/2016 9:43:00 PM

Hi, folks-

Well, that was a toughie to judge, so I had to set the criteria as per how Limericks work,

and as a result, I only had eight finalists.

A couple of entries weren't Limericks at all, several had a letter 'e' in them, and a few really good ones were let down by an uneven syllable count.

My final choice is those that got through the filters, and above all were true to a Limerick in that

after reading the first line, you know what the meter is going to be for the rest of the verse.

So- In first place,

'Always half full', by Sandra Haight-

Smooth flow, easy to read, effortlessly writ, and lovely, warm content. Well done, Sandra.

Second place-

Tony Devers' Limerick-

Once again, easy to pick up the flow, just a soft gentle piece.

 

Third place-

Jan Allison's Limerick-

I picked this for a couple of reasons, namely it was what I call  'A sevener', with syllable count of '7,7,5,5,7  , which are difficult to do, and also it is in the original true style of a humourous verse. There were many similar in content which would have made it but for syllable count and meter. The sign of a good Limerick is that once you have read the first line, you don't get to the end and have to re-read it and change the rythmn in your head.

Congrats to the other finalists, and the first three I shall be in touch with soon. Thanks to everyone for taking part.

Love 'n hugs, and handshakes and stuff,

Viv x.



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Date: 10/15/2016 12:09:00 PM
Just got to say I agree with you about Jean - she is awesome ... some of us do read the rules lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2016 5:18:00 AM
So sorry that I couldn't take part, Viv, it was a great idea for a contest:) Congratulations to all the winners:)
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:32:00 PM
Viv, sorry I missed this one, great exercise for the mind with those missing e's, congrats to the winners ~
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Date: 10/14/2016 12:32:00 AM
Hi, BW, I will think up something soon, and will let you know. Feel free to have a go anyway, I'm sure that you will come up with something extraordinaire. Viv x
Date: 10/13/2016 8:20:00 AM
congrats to all the winners! Will be reading them all shortly :)-luloo
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Date: 10/13/2016 3:12:00 AM
Thanks so much for your lovely critique of my poem - I have learned so so much about meter and syllable count since I wrote my first limerick back in Feb 2014 - just looking at it now the syllable count is all over the place - time for an edit I think! I have read the winning poems and have a huge smile on my face:-) congrats to all:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2016 12:33:00 AM
Well done, Queen of fun x

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