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A country walk

A babbling stream, a peaceful lane
These are the things that I enjoy
As I walk on a summers day
With a warm gentle breeze upon my face

A cottage in a field, with swirling smoke
A family sitting round ready to eat
Rich chicken soup and freshly baked bread
Then five little children all snug in their bed

A flitting bird upon the nest
Protecting her brood from unknown harm
A cow chewing cud all gentle and calm
Then sheep and one dog in one accord

Oh what a beautiful land we have
If we would take the time to see
Instead of rushing through the day
Let’s sit for a while and take it all in


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  1. Date: 4/16/2014 8:27:00 PM

    Hi there Julie, this is an exquisite poem that beautifully depicts the attractions of your heart! Thank you for the kind comments on my poem, grateful!
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 5:21:00 PM

    Hi Julie, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 10:25:00 AM

    Hi Julie, oh wow! I'll sit a while, and enjoy all time. How beautiful. the stream, the summer days, You shared a lovely warm breeze, upon this soup. Thank you. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 9:09:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery in this piece...this sounds like retirement to me. Oh but I have a long way to go..lol But all in all, I'm thankful for where I'm at now and what I do have...He did bless me with it. lovely message!
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 5:25:00 AM

    Beautiful poem. Enjoyed it. Welcome and regards.
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 4:01:00 AM

    - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Julie :) - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 12:36:00 AM

    Indeed..the simple pleasures of life are what make it almost worthwhile. This poem is nice and reasonably well written.

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