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Haiku 43

war flashback -
gingerly I cross the
sprouting daffodils

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  1. Date: 10/23/2014 3:37:00 PM

    To me this haiku speaks with several tongues...the beautiful and the ugly. I can see the need to give the young a chance to live and grow, saving them from the ugliness of war....I can also visualize the victims of landmines and other fatalities of war. Of course, you have your personal ideas, but we are left free to ponder....// paul
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 1:23:00 PM

    - I remember that you were really expert in Haiku poems, Timothy! - This is really amazing !!! - My English grammar is not 100% - I appreciate being corrected (but prefer S-mail) - Thank You :) - A rainy Thursday is almost over .... - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 12:52:00 PM

    excellent pen timothy really love how this drew for me
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 10:23:00 PM

    I haven't been on the Soup for awhile and I really miss it! This poem exemplifies what I missed! What a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece! Great Work!!
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 4:25:00 PM

    wow, VERY good one!! I don't know if you will see my reply, but yes, the man really said the words: I am not afraid. It was a scene from a good movie I saw this year.
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 3:22:00 PM

    Excellent haiku!

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