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Goodbye, balloon

she said
you're like a balloon,
floating away in the 
distance 

it seems
gravity can't
hold you and
the wind
takes you

further away 
each day,
but I can't
make myself

pull back 
on the string
so instead,
I push

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  1. Date: 10/25/2014 5:00:00 PM

    David, a nice poem here, I like the imagery. We release balloons on a departed one's birthday, your poem makes me think of this.
  1. Date: 10/25/2014 4:17:00 PM

    oh so deep and sad David you cant hold on to her so push her further and further away :-( hugs Jan xxx

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