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On Fire

ON FIRE!

Fuming, bleeding,
running
The edge of the
world
Is red on fire
A golden sphere
Sinks beneath the
earth
Dragging the clouds
And the sky down
with it

Strip of purple
The sky fighting 
Against the sun
Melting away
Beyond a twisting
canyon
Sunset

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  1. Date: 7/25/2014 4:35:00 PM

    This is mighty hot, Victoria,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 11:48:00 AM

    - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Victoria :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 10:13:00 AM

    wonderful imagery and a flood of colour. Hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 7/25/2014 10:03:00 AM

    "A very warm welcome Victoria! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to visti my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"

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