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Unbelievable Consequences

The more merciful love is the more I yearn to cry
for life has decorated me with offerings of discomfort
I can't hold on to an aching heart for which I abide by.

living in oblivion, an opening, to hellish earth
as nothingness is seen through the eyes of a victim
I ask whole heartedly for an instant rebirth.

I do know that I am adept and have wisdom
I also found out because I'm clever I know the hallowness,
a falsity which makes my uncertainties fearsome.

Where I am heading, I do not know. What am I to do next?
It is a fact that being sober I am able to openly ruminate 
with displays of obscure images leaving me perplexed.

Do I have the time to think about the past and contemplate?
Awkward questions yet they need to be answered as such
for if I have to live soberly, logic, I have to reinstate. 

Did I really do that? Have I possibly give pain that much?
Why all these visions? Why am I feeling this persecution?
I did something for the best yet I'm facing a dire judge.

Damn the time that I was leaned towards the evil solution
**** the growth of the grapevine and **** the winemaking invention.



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  1. Date: 7/18/2014 4:08:00 PM

    Hi Freddie, your plight was clearly portrayed in this write. I was addicted to both Hooch and booze for forty years. now it is like a distant dream to me. I am completely free from all my shit. I wish you well, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 7/18/2014 2:05:00 PM

    Poem written from the heart with such a powerful message. hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 7/18/2014 5:24:00 AM

    Awesome write Freddie ! And may I see the concluding lines as the moral of the addictive ? grave consequences indeed// upma//