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Through The Mist

I can see what is near to broken eyes.
The mist is film on blurry blue vision.
The taste of fog as gentle quick disguise.
My love has given me full admission.
A morning moisture caresses loves lies.
Condensation breathes life into his sin.
As this forgiveness is priced he will pay.
In through the mist he rides to come today.


For contest: Through the mist
Name: Casarah Nance
Date: 08-24-2014

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  1. Date: 8/25/2014 9:53:00 AM

    Beautifully written but I think please little attention to the sixth line rhyme, Casarah
  1. Date: 8/25/2014 9:15:00 AM

    You have captured the theme perfectly.
  1. Date: 8/24/2014 6:21:00 PM

    Hidden in the fog blurring vision masking his sin. Very deep Cas....hugs Tim
  1. Date: 8/24/2014 5:31:00 PM

    lovely take on the theme Casarah:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 8/24/2014 3:33:00 PM

    A very nice poem for the contest, best of luck ~~
  1. Date: 8/24/2014 3:02:00 PM

    Philosophically worded and artistically pictured. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,my friend,bl

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