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'nice House'

There was a criminal who built a small house
To stay away from the scout
Then he thought he could never be found out

There was a criminal who built a medium house
To shelter the small house and
To stay away from the scout
Then he thought he could never be found out

There was a criminal who built a large house
To shelter the medium house
To shelter the small house and
To stay away from the scout
Then he thought he could never be found out

There was a criminal who built an extra-large house
To shelter the large house
To shelter the medium house
To shelter the small house and
To stay away from the scout
Then he thought he could never be found out

There was a criminal who built a jumbo house
To shelter the extra-large house
To shelter the large house
To shelter the medium house
To shelter the small house and
To stay away from the scout
Then he thought he could never be found out

Till one day
The house caught the eye of the scout
The scout searched out and browsed the house
The criminal was arrested as the scout finally caught the mouse

Nice house but there is nobody home.

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Moon Flower Date: 5/29/2016 1:28:00 AM That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Pui-man. :)
Skat A Date: 5/22/2016 3:36:00 PM Pui-man Aemiley Chiu,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2016 7:37:00 AM Pui-man,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

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