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There Was Once

There was once a young dancer
Who was recovering from cancer
She wanted fame 
but her leg was lame
So people called her a prancer.
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I know it's really mean and sad but I had this as homework 
and I honestly couldn't think of 
rhyming words and than I just thought of this.

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Beata Agustin Date: 2/7/2024 7:43:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/28/2016 1:16:00 PM secrets, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
Skat A Date: 9/9/2015 3:02:00 PM Secrets, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 12/27/2014 6:44:00 AM Oh poor poor dancer, yeah dancing must be hard on our skeletal system, our clavicles, bones. I hav read of many dancers who damage like that. U rhymed it in a super cool way, sad n humoured in a gud way. Mery xmas
Charlene Mccutcheon Date: 11/7/2014 8:50:00 PM I really liked your limerick. Yes sad yet funny too. Thanks for sharing your talent. And thank you for visiting my poem "Bucket Full of Love" and leaving a kind comment. Love, Charlene
Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/22/2014 6:29:00 AM really beautifully penned
Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/14/2014 11:11:00 PM you could say in the last line: so instead, she became a prancer! To me, that would make it a wee bit funnier!! Cute idea.
James Fraser Date: 9/1/2014 3:14:00 PM Well done Talicia, and we know this funny/sad Limerick isn't meant to offend. Good luck with your homework. Thank you kindly for visiting my page, James :)
Sara Kendrick Date: 9/1/2014 9:30:00 AM Sad..Sometimes our dreams just don't come true..Enjoyed reading this emotive and inspiring work..Sara
Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/31/2014 4:12:00 AM Nice write Talicia. Verlena
Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/30/2014 12:42:00 AM Hi, Talicia, you have to write a sad poem. :) If you want to surprise me.... Linda
Tim Smith Date: 8/24/2014 9:17:00 AM You need one more syllable in line three...you might say "she wanted some fame"....to make it not as mean...you could do line two "Recovering from cancer".......hugs Tim
Jan Allison Date: 8/24/2014 8:21:00 AM I would love to see the final line end in chancer and be positive about what she is doing on the lines of 'admire her shes a chancer' I will say no more it is too close to home:-( Hugs jan xx
Princess Xia Date: 8/24/2014 8:07:00 AM I laughed a bit, and felt bad a bit. But it is turning a bad situation into and all right one!
Casarah Nance Date: 8/24/2014 6:59:00 AM I chuckled at this :) um you should seperate the fame, lame, line so its five lines. but your rhymes are go and great flow :) hope you get a good grade ;)

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