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MESMERIZED

Through open window I saw you there
Oh please forgive my silly childlike stare
Once all alone now we could become a pair
Mesmerized by your light

You know you shine brighter than the rest
It’s incredibly obvious you’re exquisitely best
Under the porch light a sweet romantic test
Mesmerized by your light
 
Yes! I'm flying high and not at all surprised
To see such brilliance you're beautifully alive
Your other suitors they never seem to survive
Mesmerized by your light

Sure I’ve been warned you’re more than clever
Told that closer to you means closer to never
To hold you in that moment is to regret forever
Mesmerized by your light

But to see others fall only makes me stronger
How can I resist your angel glow any longer
Reached out to touch couldn't have been wronger
Whether I was man or moth.. now I'm a goner!

Contest: Craig's "Chopped II"
Date: 11-12-14

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  1. Date: 11/23/2014 10:35:00 AM

    Lovely words Lyric Man as always. Wishing you and your family a very blessed, joyful and happy Thanksgiving that will create warm memories to cherish for years to come oxox Gail
  1. Date: 11/22/2014 11:42:00 PM

    Good stuff Lyric Man!
  1. Date: 11/21/2014 3:24:00 PM

    I understand why your name is Lyric Man. I love this stanza " Sure I’ve been warned you’re more than clever Told that closer to you means closer to never To hold you in that moment is to regret forever"... Awesome! Thanks for sharing
  1. Date: 11/20/2014 8:33:00 PM

    Everyone has a light that shines. It takes insight to be able to see. And that my friend, you have!
  1. Date: 11/19/2014 1:32:00 PM

    Love the ending.
  1. Date: 11/19/2014 8:31:00 AM

    haha loved the change at the end great poem
  1. Date: 11/17/2014 8:46:00 PM

    Interesting use of free verse lines to end your first four stanzas. Beautiful allegory and imagery with humorous ending.
  1. Date: 11/17/2014 5:37:00 PM

    Interesting and arresting. Cleverly written with lovely ironic twists.
  1. Date: 11/17/2014 10:25:00 AM

    I am very taken with this poem! I love the repeating of the last line. This is my favorite way of writing! Enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 11/15/2014 11:41:00 PM

    I can actually visualize a beautiful woman sitting on the porch under the light, me staring memorized, and then oh yes then the restraining order!!! Great poem!
  1. Date: 11/15/2014 9:16:00 PM

    I enjoyed your romantic and positive poem. Beautifully written. Good luck on your entry! Coty Benrimoj
  1. Date: 11/15/2014 8:41:00 PM

    What a great entry for the contest Dave! A romantic glow to this makes your entry clever! Sure to do well in the contest!
  1. Date: 11/15/2014 8:33:00 AM

    Nothing is rigid, change is must. A beautiful philosophy, very painful to feel that. A grate visionary of changes in to the happenings with environmental elements. Superb one. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
  1. Date: 11/15/2014 1:30:00 AM

    yes exquisite Dave superb hugs
  1. Date: 11/14/2014 12:47:00 AM

    i really enjoyed it thanks for sharing
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 3:23:00 PM

    just this: hypnotized!...and ohh, where's the porch light?.. hugs, dave!
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 1:15:00 PM

    Love the ending Dave...good luck
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 1:06:00 PM

    Very sweet. Gave me warm chills my dear. -TJ
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 11:19:00 AM

    Oh my heart strings are humming the same old comforting song, Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful, xxx
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 11:09:00 AM

    Good romantic stuff Lyric Man!
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 8:31:00 AM

    once a romantic always a romantic, even with this challenge you stay true to who you are..good luck my poetic friend
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 8:02:00 AM

    I like the flow of your poem, particularly the "Mesmerized by your light," ending all but the final verse. You play with sounds beautifully! Gail :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 7:46:00 AM

    Fantastic!!!Charma
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 6:23:00 AM

    I'm mesmerized by your thought process that created this beautiful poem Dave. Well done and thanks for visiting earlier. Write on... Terry
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 5:06:00 AM

    Great poem Dave good luck in contest
  1. Date: 11/13/2014 2:52:00 AM

    Great write dave great words, style,flow and rhyme. Enjoyed the read, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 11/12/2014 11:03:00 PM

    I like the ending too. And I am mesmerized by how prolific you are
  1. Date: 11/12/2014 9:14:00 PM

    Very nice write Dave...with a good ending..
  1. Date: 11/12/2014 9:06:00 PM

    I also agree with Casarah, WOW! Super WOW!!
  1. Date: 11/12/2014 8:58:00 PM

    WOW.!
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