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You question duskiness "Whereas he be?"
Be careful pal; he hides behind the tree!
Inside the sneaky shades he aptly lurks
because you've drunk too many Cuty Sarks.

You, silly chump! You're shaking on your feet;
Contele Dracula* and tough tidbit
exists inside your foolishness' resource
and punishes your wrongs without remorse.

Excess in drinking could be bad for you;
tis not that you'll become a drunk boo-hoo
but he'll metamorphose to baseball bat
and if you drink again, he'll kick your butt.

I know you're stupefied and very scared
cause Gigi hides in pizza boxes where'd
jump up, if thee besotted be and fool,
and then consume your pizza, super-cool.

Admit it, dude! You're shivering in fear!
But if you prayed he would disappear,
expect him to start dancing everywhere-s,
and jingle, so, his spurs upon your stairs.

Ha ha! Hill Billy, you! Outside your house,
behind the pumpkins, sound the irked meows:
bewildered Gigi cats will jump ahead,
inside your car and on your empty head.

You should, thus, paint your house pistachi'o green
cause if you stall before your PC screen
he'll haunt the lines of your poetic calls
and bats will eat your order of spring rolls.

© 10-02-2014, G. Phookan, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic Pentameter) 
* Contele Dracula = Count Dracula in Romanian


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  1. Date: 11/23/2014 11:19:00 AM

    No knowledge of the contest or its requirements but this is a quality write. Great flow, smooth sailing and a truly interesting read. A sure 7 and believe it should place at the top..
  1. Date: 11/9/2014 3:44:00 AM

    I have not seen the contest so I had no idea this was an HM. I am surprised because the quality of this write is undeniable.
  1. Date: 11/9/2014 3:40:00 AM

    What a fun collaboration. Congratulations to you both.
  1. Date: 11/6/2014 12:37:00 PM

    - I'm a little late ..... But, I will congratulate you on a great winning poems Giorgio and Gautami ! - (A 1st place poems I said .... I'm glad it's not me who judges :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2014 4:01:00 AM

    Giorgio,,, Thank you so soooo much for composing this poem,, ''Gigi poem'' with me. Umm.. NO, the other way round :)) Thank you for having me to compose this poem with you! Yes, now that sounds correct. It turned out so beautiful,, an awesome happy poem and written with great precision(your part)!! I loved working on it with YOU!!!!! Love
  1. Date: 11/4/2014 8:05:00 PM

    An amazing write you two. I guess the scar factor was missing but that's why I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 11/2/2014 12:22:00 PM

    - Giorgio, a truly awesome poem! - From two talented poets! - A pleasure to read :) - Good luck in the contest (the winning poem !!!) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/2/2014 12:18:00 AM

    wow that was weird. i clicked 7 and after I replied it didnt show up
  1. Date: 11/2/2014 12:17:00 AM

    wow your poem was amazing. A 7 for sure from me. the way you flowed intense for me. you did a great job. Thanks for sharing this