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Autumn's Ceremony

There stood an imaginary, invisible houri fairy
A bride under a maple tree
Dressed in prism-hued layers
of chifon in ethereal shimmers
and delicate gossamer
She having her weeny wedding in the fall
And fairy folk bustled about all round her
as flimsy and flighty as they could be
while red-gold leaves fell down upon her
in ceremonial nuptial
An autumn's ritual
and as nature's pretty confetti!

Branches denuded
Yet autumn's august
for the wilting's 
The willowy fairy
almost drowned
in gorgeous fallen maple leaves
Playing hide 'n'seek with her brownie groom camouflaged in the heap.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2015 9:26:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this whimsical story with a lovely autumn setting... Just wonderful!
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 10:44:00 AM

    What a fabulous write, you penned this a great and with vivid imagery...........A.M.
  1. Date: 8/23/2015 5:45:00 PM

    What lovely imagery! Like to write also on my favourite subject faeries as they do live in Mother Nature's realm. Autumn is a favourite season for me---August such a majestic time. Again I really enjoyed visiting,take care....didee
  1. Date: 8/23/2015 2:47:00 AM

    This is rather good, S! I really did enjoy the imagery - Excellent! My very best regards! :) john
  1. Date: 8/20/2015 6:42:00 PM

    I love your write and how you penned it. It flows smoothly in the heart. So much intriguing.........A.M.
  1. Date: 8/20/2015 6:35:00 PM

    And so she dances through the leaves, caressing the branches as she twists and turns, and cajoles them to do the same.....Great imagery and lovely turn of phrase applied throughout this poem. Love the word gossamer so Ignore Tom's hang-ups. :-)
  1. Date: 8/20/2015 9:23:00 AM

    you have a gift for words, to be sure (though you used gossamer - arrrgh!) just teasing, it's a word that get's a treatment in my poem: Poetry - Bah!. anyway, interesting take on autumn fairies and suchlike
  1. Date: 8/20/2015 7:20:00 AM

    Î die for a landscape about the Fall and more about a poem depicting the charms of the Fall,the Autumn houri is so gorgeous and holding all the beauty of nature !! *the shepherd with my best regards Zayneb*