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Ode to the salty tear

O' Salty tear, a mere clear drop that you are
You've emerged for a million different reasons
many of which only the shedder knows
for you've emerged in all seasons.

The season of sadness or reason of joy
the tears of grief and the tears of joy
You and your unalloyed saline taste
thou art' but an emotional waste.

O'Salty tear each time you drop into oblivion
why not vanish away with your shedder's grief? 
I tell you O' tear if you're to take my opinion
oughtn't you grant your shedder full relief? 

Ah but thou art' a ceaseless ocean in reserve and store
No one can be sure, he'll cry no more
When you trickle down those sad upturned lips
we know destiny perhaps made those painful slips! 

You are the raindrops of a grief-clouded heart
You do emerge when two lovers have to part

Help your shedder turn over a new leaf
so you're associated less with grief.

I've watched many a jilted lover
weep all alone by the sea-side most sorrowfully
and watched tears glide down noses or pince-nez
as their salty tears merged into the salty sea.

O' Salty tear but it's time you learnt to wash away
all and any poignancy from your shedder's heart
and be such a buddy who never wishes to meet again
the tearful shedder from whom you depart!


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  1. Date: 2/24/2015 1:29:00 AM

    If our tears could eventually run out it would bring immense relief to us all... This poem is soulful, beautiful and so well expressed. Excellent writing!
  1. Date: 2/21/2015 12:04:00 AM

    Incredible and Beautiful. S.,z K, epicly deep **SKAT LOVE**
  1. Date: 2/20/2015 5:23:00 AM

    phenomenal write, S! i could taste your words here!
  1. Date: 2/19/2015 11:47:00 PM

    A single tear can hold the weight of a lifetime. Splendid writing my friend. bfn Elane
  1. Date: 2/19/2015 11:38:00 AM

    Love it...Love how creatively you wrote about the tear. I am not educated in the different forms of poetry, however; I need not be in order to appreciate such great and creative writing. Enjoyed this immensely.
  1. Date: 2/19/2015 10:42:00 AM

    Hey S. - stopped by for a visit and this is such an inspired tribute to an intimate part of us that we seldom think about in this way. So beautifully written as well. Be Blessed, Neva
  1. Date: 2/19/2015 10:38:00 AM

    but thou art' a ceaseless ocean in reserve and store... enjoyed your pen.. a 7 from me.. nad!
  1. Date: 2/19/2015 7:00:00 AM

    'S' such beautiful words within your poem and the message is inspiring, wish I could stop the tears and thanks for visiting my poem oh the tears and for your kind comment, so appreciated ~~
  1. Date: 2/18/2015 12:55:00 PM

    I really enjoyed reading and liked the poem.You wrote this very beautifully.:)
  1. Date: 2/18/2015 11:01:00 AM

    I like this! Feels nice and easy, though I know the patience and care that has been poured into the creation of this write. I myself haven't tried mastering the many different forms and which is which. Congratulations for this wonderful quatorzain. Seven for me. I'll be back to check out the others. Bless you! :D Kim
  1. Date: 2/18/2015 8:32:00 AM

    Nicely crafted. Deserves a 7. Thanks for visiting my work.
  1. Date: 2/16/2015 12:41:00 PM

    Well penned piece pregnant with sincere emotions ! Really liked S.Zaynub !
  1. Date: 2/16/2015 12:34:00 PM

    awesome....ur selection of words is far creative than that of an ordinary poet....wish I can b more like you......cheers
  1. Date: 2/16/2015 9:11:00 AM

    This reminds of of Keats' ""ode to melancholy'' "to shed a tear better than than a pain to bear," shed your grief down and surely joys will abound, i love this poem ZAYNEB, i guess its from your heart,written, as to the metrical feet,its close to "Shakespeare sonnet" but a bit lenghty,
  1. Date: 2/16/2015 6:31:00 AM

    Love the way this flows. Wonderful pen. Blessings on this wonderful day. A 7 from me. Janet