Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
 

Falling Down

I'm falling falling ..falling down
wonder when I'll hit the ground. 

The sky is clear not a cloud in sight, I feel like I should fight but nothing seems right.
I straiten my body to slow my speed, 
twelve miles up it's hard to breath... nothing can help, it's no use to scream.

Descending to my fate I realize it's never to late, and free myself of all the hate.
The end is near I've nothing left to fear... the sound of the wind is all I hear. 
It rolls over my body like the waves upon the sand , only love shall fill these hands.

It's almost time so I let go, I wonder whats beyond the great unknown. 
Will there be angels that sing so high, or only demons with blackness for eyes.

So here I am falling falling to the ground,
falling falling all the way down.


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

 
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:07:00 AM

    Nicely written Destini! Love the way you've described the falling and the underlying subtext. Nice!
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:13:00 AM

    A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Destini. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 9/24/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your work today!! keep writing..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:20:00 PM

    wonderful, bless you in your walk. love and God bless
  1. Date: 9/23/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Such a good piece of Poetry...

Back