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Broken trust

you stare
I looked
on the table
and the knife pierced on it
who will take the first
you
or I
I know for sure that you will act
but I'm very curious
when and how it
then I just close my eyes
pretend to sleep
so I can end my suffering
by letting you stab my heart in 3 seconds



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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:06:00 PM

    Beautiful and original poem.
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:15:00 AM

    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Muflih. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:03:00 PM

    so much suspense in your poem. Enjoyed it. hugs, catie :)

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