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Haiku 2

neath' my umbrella
stolen kiss, among gray skies
echoes..run bi***..run

naked..here with you
so..you dared me to do this
rain kisses the pond

Kissing in the rain (2 haiku) contest, pictures #4 and #6
5-23-2013
©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Haha Oh my. Donna, you rock! :) GREAT job on these.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 8:18:00 PM

    You're giving me jumbo smiles on this fantastic & super sweet haiku of yours my very dear friend, Donna. I'm sure it'll do well in the contest! Two thumbs up and good luck my dear friend! love lots, Leonora
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:09:00 PM

    Oh, you went there Donna, ha ha, awesome my friend! You have written a tremendous write Donna, one that I feel being influenced by its workings! As much as the first Haiku strikes an impact, I like the grandiosity of it as well, there is something special with this piece! Your whole collection of Haiku works very well together, I really enjoyed reading these poems this evening! What a powerful write you have composed, Great Work!!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:57:00 PM

    I'm getting a chuckle out of the soft and sweet comment below mine. I think I know what your B word was and it's not sweet. hahaha. Funny.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:30:00 PM

    - I like your version .... so soft & sweet - Good luck in the contest, Donna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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