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So It's Personal 080412

Only one time 

Will I allow this to happen 
I'm glad we wrote in pencil not pen

You deserve to be with

The one who you claimed
I could be mean and

Tell your deed,but I

Truly would be violating
The creed in which I

Wrote "NEVER MAKE
A FOOL OUT OF YOURSELF

FOR ANYBODY, IF THEY WONT

DO IT FOR YOU"

Every night I hung on to your
every word and

I thought you were genuine

I loved who you were
when I thought I knew you


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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Such a sense or hurt and anger in your poem. Reading this I feel it would work well as a spoken poem,(the way all poems should be I guess) if it was extended a little. However, some strong lines in...... loved who you were when I thought I knew you.........Will I allow this to happen I'm glad we wrote in pencil not pen. (excellent lines). Life is a school and we all learn from the setbacks it deals us. Thank you for sharing and I wish you well.

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