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I See You

I see you
Do you see me peeking at you
From behind the rose bush?
Look at your lovely hair - a tousled mess
Those eyes, gleaming in the afternoon sunlight

I pull on your apron strings
Perchance a small smile
Oh no! Not a frown from you


I see you
Did you know that I was watching you
When you were busy making chocolate cake?
Just look at your sweet face
Flour on your nose and cheek

I squeeze your arm tightly
Mayhaps I get the spoon
Thank you for keeping me close


I see you
You don't know that I am looking at you
Wrapped up in your blanket
So cozy and warm - a quiet nod
A peaceful time for you

Can hardly wait for you to waken
I'll find a hiding place
So I can watch again


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  1. Date: 2/26/2015 11:19:00 PM

    I keep coming back to this one now. It is so delightful.
  1. Date: 2/24/2015 6:38:00 PM

    Dear Neva, What a refreshing work, it's so sweetly written and expressed I feel as though you capture a piece of photograph of an afternoon with me and one of my grandgirls playing, thanks for the special sharing of this poem, cheri
  1. Date: 2/24/2015 4:43:00 AM

    What a lovely poem...the love is palpable. Thanks for sharing this sweet write.
  1. Date: 2/24/2015 12:14:00 AM

    Simple romance is the best. A very enjoyable poem to read.
  1. Date: 2/23/2015 3:10:00 PM

    This poem comes across and sweet and innocent, like first love much enjoyed xxxx
  1. Date: 2/22/2015 6:43:00 AM

    A wonderful sentiment expressed in a marvelous way! A joy inspiring write my friend, wish I that could give it a super ten but A7 is tops from me. Bravoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 2/20/2015 3:37:00 PM

    Oh this is so lovely....magnetic attraction between mother and child...innocent voyeurism. I really like it. // paul
  1. Date: 2/20/2015 10:09:00 AM

    Disarmingly charming write you have here, Neva. I like its simplicity and innocent approach to address the beloved in her routine and even in slumber. Seven! Smiles from the thousand isles. :D
  1. Date: 2/20/2015 9:04:00 AM

    " Just look at your sweet face Flour on your nose and cheek " That brought smile ! Good One Neva :) Your comments are very encouraging too. Have a beautiful weekend :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2015 10:18:00 AM

    This is completely charming, Neva - how a small one would think watching a loved one. thanks for the visit. Love, daver
  1. Date: 2/18/2015 10:09:00 AM

    This looks like a beautiful poem written in a superb style on behalf as if of the hubby. Delightful to read. Pls do review my latest poem too.
  1. Date: 2/17/2015 7:35:00 PM

    This is beautiful Neva, such a touching poem. A 7 for me. I will be back when I have more time read. Janet
  1. Date: 2/17/2015 2:32:00 PM

    I see you, in all things you do. The breath left behind on my neck, the touch on the shoulder when your behind me, the love that holdes me when I'm in tears. Beautiful visionary poem. A 7 Neva
  1. Date: 2/13/2015 9:28:00 AM

    Beautiful... It reminds me of a little girl watching her momma....loving all the things she does....hugs Tim
  1. Date: 2/12/2015 12:38:00 PM

    Neva, a poem full of longing, love and fun, and lovely words, well done and thanks for the visit ~~
  1. Date: 2/11/2015 9:43:00 PM

    The personification of love -- watching you with fondness and care . . . you don't see her but you feel it . . . the love in the wind, the sun, in flour . . . brushing against you. You know it's there . . . love covers me. Outstanding poem -- my take on it!! Much love and light dear Neva. 7
  1. Date: 2/11/2015 9:14:00 AM

    Sweet anticipation expressed in a romantic and tender way! Wonderfully done dear Neva!
  1. Date: 2/7/2015 6:44:00 PM

    A truly imaginative piece, so well written. Delightful to ponder.
  1. Date: 2/6/2015 1:56:00 PM

    Excellent, Neva! It reminds me of the Police song, Every Breath You Take...sweet and loving yet with a slight dark tinge of possessiveness...my interpretation, anyway! Thanks for your visit...hugs, Rhonda
  1. Date: 2/6/2015 11:16:00 AM

    Hey Neva there is a sense of innocence in this yet it is a very powerful write, I like the way you move from the present to the future and still retain a sense of mystery, very well done....David
  1. Date: 2/4/2015 7:49:00 PM

    This poem is an absolutely beautiful story filled with love and warm human feelings. The author skillfully brought the reader into the story and we felt comfortable as well as entertained. Emile.
  1. Date: 2/3/2015 11:11:00 PM

    What a cute poem, Neva:) love it!
  1. Date: 2/3/2015 1:24:00 PM

    This is such a charming poem with delightful imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 2/2/2015 5:16:00 PM

    Sweet, lovely and showing deep love!
  1. Date: 2/2/2015 2:30:00 PM

    Good read very pleased to read
  1. Date: 2/2/2015 9:35:00 AM

    Neva It's a wonderful poem. So lovely. My fav. A perfect 7.God bless.Your friend Rajat
  1. Date: 2/1/2015 12:47:00 PM

    - A sweet and lovely poem, Neva - // Anne-Lise :)

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