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Down to Earth

***Rated R for strong sexuality including frontal nudity, language, smoking, and some violence.

Tuesdays at her place
Tuesdays knock me down

down-town insinuation
down under laughing

laughing by moustache that tickles
laughing too matters

matters we should attend
matters of taste

taste our own medicine
taste of secret evenings

evenings for pirates' love
evenings working late

late to keep vows
late by four hours

hours on acrobatics
hours clutching headboard and pillows

pillows under push-pull motion
pillows talk

talk dirty
talk through

through all the senses
through rhythmic banging against walls

walls that magnify shadows
walls don't tell

tell no one
tell me if it's better

better get used to it
better hurry up

up-in-the-air toes
upside down

down to earth
down under again

again next week
again please

please yourself
please stay longer

longer chances of getting caught
longer than usual

usual humor
usual lovers

lovers who don't carve names into trees
lovers beyond moons and moans

moans that shake legs
moans to breathe

breathe in her breath
breathe the dust of earth

earth before heaven


(Fictional, I've shaved my moustache a year ago).

Copyright © Ruben O.


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  1. Date: 9/12/2015 9:42:00 PM

    Ruben, your Down Under is On Top.. Congrats on your win!
  1. Date: 9/12/2015 2:53:00 PM

    Ruben, this Blitz is a masterpiece! What an enjoyable read from start to finish! I hope to one day produce something of this caliber! BRAVO on your top of the class win and a 7! Pandita
  1. Date: 9/12/2015 8:57:00 AM

    Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
  1. Date: 9/8/2015 5:23:00 PM

    Ruben, quite the hot and steamy write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
  1. Date: 9/8/2015 11:53:00 AM

    Your mustache may be gone, but not your wit !! I love the way you take chances and push limits !!! Made me laugh...(With the theme of down under--- I "under-estimated" you !! LOL !!
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 2:33:00 PM

    Many congrats on your win Ruben - love your humour in the warning lol:-) hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 2:11:00 PM

    congratulations Ruben on your top tier win
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 11:45:00 AM

    Back with much deserved congratulations for a daring blitz, Ruben! ~ All the best. // paul
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 11:15:00 AM

    Congrats on your win dear Ruben xxx
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 7:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Ruben, Hugs Eve
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 5:51:00 AM

    Congrats on your big win Reuben!
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 2:43:00 AM

    Hey, I just now saw you got FIRST place. So my instincts were right about your poem. you DID do it the best! Congrats.
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 2:33:00 AM

    oh lookie. It's still here and the poetry police have not taken it down! heehee
  1. Date: 9/7/2015 12:10:00 AM

    Wow....adorable poem...congrats on big win!!!!, Anu:-)
  1. Date: 9/6/2015 11:24:00 PM

    First place win in Debbie's contest means really awesome! Big congrats Ruben!
  1. Date: 9/6/2015 11:01:00 PM

    Wow! Really fun to read... used the form so beautifully... Congrats for top spot... Cheers, Bobby
  1. Date: 9/6/2015 10:15:00 PM

    Congratulations, on a seriously awesome poem, Ruben. Always, Laura
  1. Date: 9/6/2015 8:51:00 PM

    Congrad's Ruben, I know you didn't need any help letting GO! Light & Love Always
  1. Date: 9/5/2015 11:02:00 AM

    This sure came across as a lighthearted reading romp for me-- a fun read as to where Tuesdays can lead you to ;)... and very funny with the mustache tidbit! I remember reading another blitz from you and yup, I have yet to try writing in this form-- maybe within the year? Yeah right. I'm still trying to imagine you without the mustache though.... hmm nah.
  1. Date: 8/26/2015 7:13:00 AM

    LOL, very nice, Ruben! Sexy! Apparently, with all that wall banging, those walls are not silent! Loved this one! L&H, catie :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 11:19:00 PM

    I love the way one thought leads into another. Sooo sexy and playful, with the right touch of passion. :) Brandy
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 10:04:00 PM

    But that warning and rating was just a joke, right? lol Anyway, I think it's cute. x
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 9:58:00 PM

    I like the hours clutching headboards and pillows. I enjoyed reading this, Ruben, it doesn't have to be explicit to be good :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 7:49:00 PM

    Well dear poet...I am expecting that the pneuma on the other side of this write is comfortably numb....I mean taking the siesta ! Wowzers Ruben ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james...P.S....Ruben, look at my avatar....[no irratacion]...*smiles*
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 3:50:00 PM

    wow, of all the examples of this insane poetry form, yours is about the only one I have enjoyed. This form is just really silly to me, but the way you did yours, it was very interesting to read. Maybe you just have that special knack for this form! So funny your note at the bottom and the "rating warning" I'd say more a PG13!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 7:17:00 AM

    You did this so well Ruben. Both naughty and fun. So the fictional part was the mustachio??!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 4:29:00 AM

    i saw this one last night and liked it a lot; it's very well crafted, well thought out; i don't think this form is easy - you are always original, ruben, never dull or predictable! :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 12:46:00 AM

    this rocks the senses with all the lovin' motion and delight, one!.. huggs
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 10:58:00 PM

    A laid back kinda lovemaking...full of charming nuance...something you'd be looking to doing over and over this same encounter...taking your sweet time! Great writing R rated #EASY TIME 7 for me
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 8:25:00 PM

    moustache which tickles/moustache bristles-bristles that burn/ bristles crew cut-cut by the razor/cut on my wrist- wrist watch/ wrist kissed-kissed arches/kissed lobes-lobes of my ears/lobes bottom up .... ;)
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