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At First I was Afraid

At first I was afraid, I was full inside.
Two-hours meeting with my boss,
I couldn't leave; I tried.
I accepted to bear my cross,
feeling shivers all along,
nothing's wrong:
only one finger of King Kong.

And then, cold sweat! Through waves of pain.
A deadly silent one escaped:
beans, cole, leek, lentils, and butane.
I should have known it's a mistake.
I should have tried to hold it back.
I should have taken a short break.
I almost died of heart attack!

He looked at me; I couldn't breathe ...
I'm heading home, now
'cause I'm not working anymore.
Weren't the fiber and the cereal good enough
I mumble jumble, 
my turtle head pokes, I can't stoop! 

Nine, one, and one! I need to poop!
As soon as I get home ... I'll poop.
If I arrive alive,
If I can long survive,
If I can hold it and strive,
I'll poop and poop! I'll poop and poop! Hey, hey ...

I need to poop! I need to ... oh, oh!


Inspired by:
Silent One's contest: Music to my Ears -- I will survive, line: "At first I was afraid"
Roy's contest: Everyone Poops.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2015 10:37:00 AM

    lol, who wouldn't have a tummy twirl in this situation, ruben.. so funny!.. huggs
  1. Date: 8/1/2015 10:07:00 PM

    Hello dear poet friend ! It is a pleasure of course to read new from the you sir...This "Free Verse" is just that ! I take that form with a seriousnesss Ruben, cause, just what you have accomplished here...freeness of speach, dumping on slip effortlessly ! Pun intended sir ! I'm gonna read your 27th's write as well...it better be good !...*smiles* Have a wonderful upcoming week my friend...much love, james
  1. Date: 8/1/2015 9:14:00 AM

    A7 for this very humorous poem. Always better to leave the big stinker at home than in the office restroom for others to encounter !
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 7:14:00 PM

    You must have been petrified ...lol....funny piece Ruben
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 6:26:00 PM

    so funny. this is the first one I have read for this contest. Best wishes, i know it will do very well, so funny! L&H, catie :)
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 5:57:00 PM

    Oh geee , Headlines- Everybody poops lol.. Im not sure this is fiction , I need to stay away if I need to survive after all those cereals and lentils.Funny Ru : )..I am in a sad moon, and this was entertaining, tnks.
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 5:14:00 PM

    a different slant for the contest, ruben...that freakin' boss!.. one of my favorite songs which you interpreted real well... huggs
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 4:06:00 PM

    Creative work..Way to go with this one for the contest..Interesting material..Thanks for the visit..We are all doing well..Sara
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 2:44:00 PM

    Oh, oh!! Didn't make it huh? Although it's and overused term, I just gotta say, been there done that! And man when I got home? We're talkin a multiple flusher here...Funny stuff my man and GREAT idea for the contest - Tim-----PS: Thanks for the comments and favs my friend! Coming from you, that is a DEFINITE compliment...
  1. Date: 7/31/2015 2:17:00 PM

    omg Ruben! Killing two birds with one stone... that is billiant! Good job.

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