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Down to Earth - Rated R for strong sexuality

***Rated R for strong sexuality including frontal nudity, language, smoking, and some violence.


Tuesdays at her place
Tuesdays knock me down

down-town insinuation
down under laughing

laughing by moustache that tickles
laughing too matters

matters we should attend
matters of taste

taste our own medicine
taste of secret evenings

evenings for pirates' love
evenings working late

late to keep vows
late by four hours

hours on acrobatics
hours clutching headboard and pillows

pillows under push-pull motion
pillows talk

talk dirty
talk through

through all the senses
through rhythmic banging against walls

walls magnify shadows
walls don't tell

tell no one
tell me if it's better

better get used to it
better hurry up

up-in-the-air toes
upside down

down to earth
down under again

again next week
again please

please yourself
please stay longer

longer chances of getting caught
longer than usual

usual humor
usual lovers

lovers who don't carve names into trees
lovers beyond moons and moans

moans that shake legs
moans to breathe

breathe in her breath
breathe the dust of earth

earth before heaven
earth-shattering

shattering
heaven



(Fictional, I've shaved my moustache a year ago).
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  1. Date: 8/26/2015 7:13:00 AM

    LOL, very nice, Ruben! Sexy! Apparently, with all that wall banging, those walls are not silent! Loved this one! L&H, catie :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 11:19:00 PM

    I love the way one thought leads into another. Sooo sexy and playful, with the right touch of passion. :) Brandy
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 10:04:00 PM

    But that warning and rating was just a joke, right? lol Anyway, I think it's cute. x
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 9:58:00 PM

    I like the hours clutching headboards and pillows. I enjoyed reading this, Ruben, it doesn't have to be explicit to be good :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 7:49:00 PM

    Well dear poet...I am expecting that the pneuma on the other side of this write is comfortably numb....I mean taking the siesta ! Wowzers Ruben ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james...P.S....Ruben, look at my avatar....[no irratacion]...*smiles*
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 3:50:00 PM

    wow, of all the examples of this insane poetry form, yours is about the only one I have enjoyed. This form is just really silly to me, but the way you did yours, it was very interesting to read. Maybe you just have that special knack for this form! So funny your note at the bottom and the "rating warning" I'd say more a PG13!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 7:17:00 AM

    You did this so well Ruben. Both naughty and fun. So the fictional part was the mustachio??!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 4:29:00 AM

    i saw this one last night and liked it a lot; it's very well crafted, well thought out; i don't think this form is easy - you are always original, ruben, never dull or predictable! :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2015 12:46:00 AM

    this rocks the senses with all the lovin' motion and delight, ruben...cool one!.. huggs
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 10:58:00 PM

    A laid back kinda lovemaking...full of charming nuance...something you'd be looking to doing over and over again...in this same encounter...taking your sweet time! Great writing R rated #EASY TIME 7 for me
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 8:25:00 PM

    moustache which tickles/moustache bristles-bristles that burn/ bristles crew cut-cut by the razor/cut on my wrist- wrist watch/ wrist kissed-kissed arches/kissed lobes-lobes of my ears/lobes bottom up .... ;)
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 4:15:00 PM

    Oh dear.....you must do MORE than this to get anyone here riled! ;) Up in air toes....scandalous!!! ;) Moans that shake legs...OH DEAR!!!! I'm too prudish to hear....this is out of my sphere!!! Dear oh dear! ;) I was hoping for MORE....still, cute write. Hugs
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 10:43:00 AM

    A most entertaining blitz, Ruben! Down to earth, but heaven shattering! #7 // paul
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 8:00:00 AM

    Awesome...:)
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 5:48:00 AM

    This was definitely entertaining! I also love your little note there down below in parenthesis. Made me smile. ^_^ Always, Laura
  1. Date: 8/24/2015 12:22:00 AM

    Imagery of a light hearted romp on feather pillows gives this a happy 7.
  1. Date: 8/23/2015 11:59:00 PM

    I will have to disrespectfully disagree on your rating, and change it for a rating of A7. With such wit and humor you have indeed explained love and life in a down to earth manner! Great!!!
  1. Date: 8/23/2015 10:51:00 PM

    Ut oh...Tom's going to hit that button: ) ...very entertaining. Rated R for Ruben
  1. Date: 8/23/2015 9:43:00 PM

    : )..I know its rated R...but this is more of an X factor concept for me which made me giggle beyond moons ,moans and carved trees..Hey it got a bit of piracy in that moon and carved tree too. : ). love the humo(u)r..Love it.

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