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Forsaken

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Forsaken

An everlasting mountain
Set on fire
Hundreds can kill men
Among them desire

Forsaken dreams vary
All under seeking a life
Roaming as you carry
Your own voice imprisoned within

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  1. Date: 12/9/2008 11:29:00 PM

    My favourite type of poem is one that is short and poignant, this is it inside and out. Great write. Come check out my new trilogy poems i would like feedback from experienced poets. Thanks, Conor J